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Tuesday, October 15, 2019

Enchanting Forest Poem {Home Learning}

Hello Bloggers,
Today In Term 4, I have decided to do my Home Learning Blog post, on a Poem I have written.
The Poem is about a Enchanting Forest, I hope you enjoy it.




What did you think of the poem? What did you feel when reading this? What was your imagination caught on? Do you see this has a enchanting forest, with the description of the poem? Did you find anything I could fix about the poem or formatting?



If so let me know.

Thank you for Reading,
See you next time bloggers!

7 comments:

  1. Hi Nikita,


    I really like your blog post your writing is very describing it has amazing words inside of it. Keep The Great Job Up
    :)Harmony
    From HPS

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    1. Hello Harmony, I appreciate your kindness, and positivity in your comment, What do you think I should have mentioned after the poem? Did you read the questions? Is there more to the design I could have added? Thank you for your positive comment.

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  2. Hi Nikita! It's Mia here from Rimu class, as you know.
    Wow, I didn't know you liked poem writing so much, just a tip, I'm not commenting on your blog because I'm your best-friend-forever, it's because your title was the only one that interested me :) I love your use of words and pauses in your poems.

    I wrote a poem too, did you see it? Because I thought that we both did a very good job at writing poems :D. I thought this was a very good poem, it had a rhythm and has some rhyme to it. My imagination was caught on the last sentence, beautifully done!

    To improve, I think that you should add descriptive language like similes, because it slipped out of your head.

    Great work!
    Mia

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    1. Kia Ora Mia,
      I enjoyed reading your comment, and I love home much kindness you put into your comment, you always find a way to help the writer has a reader, and you show so much clear understanding.

      I have seen your poem and I think that it got me memorizing space when I thought about what my poem was gonna be about, you always have such a interesting imagination and I thank you for that, and I enjoy hearing it from my 'Best-friend-forever.'

      And your right I just had a slip of the memory when it came to doing similes I may of remember the clear rhythm too much, but I got confused at one part in your comment where you mentioned 'It had a rhythm and has some rhyme' after all thank you.

      Keep up the commenting!
      Nikita

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  3. Hello Nikita, it's me Parwin!
    I really liked your blog post and also your drawing as well. I think that the poem over all was amazing and the amount of time that you have pout into it is awesome because everything is completed to a high standard and I really like the background as well.

    While reading your poem, this reminded me of a story that I made on storybird a long time ago because it was like where this person was on a journey and they found something in the forest.

    I think that to improve, you could keep the great work up because you did an awesome job!

    Why did you decide to do this poem about a forest?



    Looking forward to your next posts,
    Parwin

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    2. Hey Parwin,
      I appreciate your comment and I find that you have shown so much kind feedback, I enjoy reading comments like this, and I hope you do too, I would love to read about your story and get more knowledge off it.

      Otherwise my reason behind this poem, is because during my time while I thought about what to write my poem about, I had a influence to do a forest, I thought of how much I love nature and I reminded myself of a video I watched which was like a clip of a movie about a forest.

      Thank you so much, keep up the fantastic comments!
      Nikita

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