Hey there bloggers!
I'm back with another writing blog-post about today's narrative writing! I found that my narrative went well, with it's appealing source of description and interest throughout it.
A phone call could mean many things, a simple conversation, mixed up confusion. But what happens when the phone call turns into something like a disaster? That's where we're heading in the life of Hannah Jackylen (Yes this is a fictional story..) Along the way you might recognize some small details changed from real life scenarios.. Lets head into it shall we?
If you manage to of gotten through that interesting story of mine, I would love your feedback. And also I found my story intreging for not only myself but if someone else like you lovely people would read it!
What's your favourite part when it comes to dramatic endings in stories? Should I continue making another chapter or two in my free time?
See you next time bloggers!
Wednesday, June 3, 2020
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Hi Nikita, It is me Michaela from your class
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good blog post and the story is very intresing. I do not think you need to do any thing but there is one thing.
Maybe you can but some more pictures in the slide well that is all from me.
Kind regards
Michaela
Thank you Michaela,
Deletefor your feedback and response to my work. I'd suspect you probably didn't read through around eight paragraphs? That's fine though, I don't mind at all. I'll try adding more images to spice up the slides also. So don't you worry!
Kind Regards,
Nikita.
I truly enjoyed your short story and was hooked straight away! Her uncle died..... I did not see that coming. I didn't even notice the lack of images because I was focused on the storyline. Thank you so much for sharing Nikita!
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