Hi my name is Alex and I am a student from St Bernadette's School. I really like the way you described how to be a hero in the library. I also like the way you put it in an animation. Next time maybe you could work on putting in a different backgrounds. For example slide 6 and 14 have the same backgrounds. I look forward to seeing more from you Mia, Mika, and Nikita.
Hi Nikita! I am Antonette from St Bernadette's Primary school.I like how you said at the end "This is how to be a hero at the library." Maybe next time you could put more characters in each slide, Like the blue triangle from the first one and it is still at slide 9. Next time please check your spelling. Keep up the good work Nikita, Mia, and Mika.
Hi, My name is Telesia. I am a student from St. Bernadette's school. I like that you made an animation to show how to be a hero in the library. Next time, you could change how the purple triangle starts each sentence. Instead of Remember to... every time, it could say Don't forget to or You should/n't and please fix library on slide 23 and 26.
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Hi my name is Alex and I am a student from St Bernadette's School. I really like the way you described how to be a hero in the library. I also like the way you put it in an animation. Next time maybe you could work on putting in a different backgrounds. For example slide 6 and 14 have the same backgrounds. I look forward to seeing more from you Mia, Mika, and Nikita.
ReplyDeleteHi Nikita! I am Antonette from St Bernadette's Primary school.I like how you said at the end "This is how to be a hero at the library." Maybe next time you could put more characters in each slide, Like the blue triangle from the first one and it is still at slide 9. Next time please check your spelling. Keep up the good work Nikita, Mia, and Mika.
ReplyDeleteHi, My name is Telesia. I am a student from St. Bernadette's school.
ReplyDeleteI like that you made an animation to show how to be a hero in the library. Next time, you could change how the purple triangle starts each sentence. Instead of Remember to... every time, it could say Don't forget to or You should/n't and please fix library on slide 23 and 26.
Keep up the good work!