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Friday, May 12, 2017

Superhero steps

     
This is a slide about how to be a superhero and its ten steps.Hope you enjoy and leave comments down below
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  1. AnonymousAugust 9, 2017 at 2:40 PM

    Hello Nikita, my name is Lauren and I am from St. Bernadette's School
    and the thing I really like is the humor that was put into the slideshow. Maybe next time you could put the missing words into place because it did flow with the words that you put. I really like how you made the pictures simple because they did not really need detail.

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2017 at 11:16 AM

      Thx for the awesome feedback on my blog post and I kept it simple so I wouldn't need to do alot of work on it even tho,It was difficult to make but I like the way you commented a nice comment and It wasn't short,Hope you wait for my next blog post while I catch up on seeing your blog.
      _Nikita_

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2017 at 11:22 AM

    Hai Ruby,I really understand you may of looked at this post first.I was reading your comment but I noticed I have been taught to do a positive helpful thoughtful comments but one more thing.I saw you have spelled my name wrong in this comment I do not have any "i" after the "t" and "a" so please check back on it and change it please also put more into it maybe put a comment I can answer next time.Please also thx for the comment and what I should study to do next thx. _Nikita_

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  3. AnonymousMarch 12, 2018 at 1:31 PM

    Hi Nikita! this is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I really liked this post because of the good reasons you have thought of. I liked the picture you used for each page. Any ideas on what you can do after you have become one and taken your steps? I think you should edit and put some more commas, because some sentences are long.

    Great work!
    Mia

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    1. AnonymousMarch 12, 2018 at 1:35 PM

      I might make another post on my blog about me doing another one, maybe sometime in the easter holidays but thanks for the credit and what you suggested I might do.

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    2. AnonymousMarch 12, 2018 at 1:38 PM

      I remember when you did it but, it was quite a while ago. You've definitely improved on your writing and commenting!

      Tell me when you post it!

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