Monday, August 8, 2016
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what do you think about my blog and thank you for the comments.I really hope you like what i put on my blog and make sure you look at my friends blog.
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Hannah and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like how you wrote your poem. I like how you put the bit about slow as an apple because an apple can't move. Have you thought about doing some art on it too?